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Sorry, no Derideal forum now.
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All topics are locked for maintenance reason.
This one is still open for the main time.
Don't worry, It will be back.
I you find an open topic other than this one, I forgot to close it so please don't post in it.
PS.
I also temporally removed all moderator right so you can't (accidentally) screw thing
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New comic May 8 '08
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New comic May 8 '08
by Guest NAME Thu May 08, 2008 4:58 pm
Perfect ending to chapter 2. To me, it looks a little "clearer" than the last comic. The background with the snowflakes was a great touch too. As well as the lighting seems better done too. If something was done different here, then keep doing it, it looks great 
Also, I found a grammatical error: 2nd panel, first line, "Wait me here, don't go anywhere." should be "Wait for me here, don't go anywhere." Only missed one word. Its ok
Also, I found a grammatical error: 2nd panel, first line, "Wait me here, don't go anywhere." should be "Wait for me here, don't go anywhere." Only missed one word. Its ok
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