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New comic May 8 '08

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New comic May 8 '08

Post by Guest NAME on Thu May 08, 2008 4:58 pm

Perfect ending to chapter 2. To me, it looks a little "clearer" than the last comic. The background with the snowflakes was a great touch too. As well as the lighting seems better done too. If something was done different here, then keep doing it, it looks great Very Happy

Also, I found a grammatical error: 2nd panel, first line, "Wait me here, don't go anywhere." should be "Wait for me here, don't go anywhere." Only missed one word. Its ok Smile

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Re: New comic May 8 '08

Post by Travisthewere on Thu May 08, 2008 6:58 pm

Crud, I musta missed it, sorry Fed Laughing

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Post by Fed on Thu May 08, 2008 7:45 pm

I change it now.

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