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Re-doing the first few comics? EmptyMon Oct 13, 2008 3:14 pm by icewind

Sorry no forum

Mon Oct 13, 2008 4:41 pm by icewind

Sorry, no Derideal forum now.

All topics are locked for maintenance reason.
This one is still open for the main time.
Don't worry, It will be back.

I you find an open topic other than this one, I forgot to close it so please don't post in it.

PS.
I also temporally removed all moderator right so you can't (accidentally) screw thing

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Post by Guest NAME Mon Jun 02, 2008 10:21 pm

Goooood. It'll be nice to see some color there Smile Keep the old ones though, so people can see how you have improved as an artist ^^

So I decided I will help. I went ahead and "cleaned up" the script. Feel free to use it at your desire. Don't feel like you HAVE to use it either.
Spoiler:

------------------Prolongo-Pagina 1------------------------------
Adres- ...
Adres- Where am I?
Adres- ...some kind of lab?
Adres- eh?
Adres- someone is coming...
Adres- I know him. -OR- I know that guy...
Adres- But I don't know how. -OR- But I'm not sure how...
Adres- Why are you here?
Adres- wh? -OR- Ehh! -OR- Ahh!
Adres- Ah! It hurts...I can't move.
Adres- My body hurts... -OR- My body is hurting...
Adres- ...but why?
Adres- What's he doing!? -OR- What's he doing now?!
Adres- no...
Adres- NO!
Adres- What are you going to do?? NO!!!
Adres- Now...it is time for more experiments. -OR- Time for more experiments, little one.

------------------- Prolongo-Pagina 2-----------------------------------
Adres- No!
Adres- Why?!?
Adres- ARRHGGGG!
Adres- Please!
Scientist- Mmm...
Scientist- Enough. -OR- Enough for now.
Scientist- Lets see...
Scientist- Hmm...interesting. It's still conscious after the shock.
Scientist- How resistant have you become? -OR- Lets see how resistant you have become.
Adres- Wha- ?!
Adres- Pain...
Adres- ...I must...
Adres- ...resist...

Ok, I'll do some more tomorrow. If I got the time, busy busy.

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Post by Fed Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:24 pm

jojo thanks man, I'll use the second one. I already finished that page
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Post by Travisthewere Tue Jun 03, 2008 9:30 am

Doing my job are you?! Lol just kidding around, it's good to see the first pages might be remade in the future. Maybe then you could actually get it down in book form and sell it, wouldn't that be awesome?
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Post by Fed Tue Jun 03, 2008 11:18 am

yah, but i don't have much progress xd
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